In some cities, the government has tired to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hours. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

Traffic jam during rush hours has been a topic that stirred up

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controversy in several countries especially developing ones. Collecting transportation tax can be a way to solve

this

problem. In

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essay, my opinion towards

this

policy will be discussed. Public

transporations

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transportation

transportations

availability is the

first

consideration topic if the congestion tariff will be applied as it is a

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commute method for residences in the city. If the subway and bus routes are widely covered and can be accessed from all over the city, the congestion tax imposed

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theory

will be positively practical to

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drivers as they have another choice of commuting

instead

of driving

aprivate

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a private

private

car.

This

mindset can be applied to big cities in developed countries like Japan, Taiwan, or Singapore which will help to reduce the traffic jam issue during

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rush hours.

However

,

this

policy will give a negative effect towards the country that

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not readily provide other commuting options to people. The number of private car usage will slightly decrease or remain almost the same because the drivers do not have many options to replace

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car driving.

Instead

,

this

regulation will increase household expenses and

consequently

lead to

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GDP problem. To conclude, the tax

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imposition

imposed

regulation is only effective if the government has provided

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commuting

options

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for the

residences

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.

Otherwise

, the traffic jam issue will not be addressed and

futher

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further

could lead to

another economic problems

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.