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These days, people prefer to throw damaged items away, while in the past, they used to repair and use things for a long time. Why do you think this change has happened? What are the effects of this change?

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It is true that
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 in industrialised nations prefer to replace their broken
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 with brand-new
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 rather than fix them. In
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 essay, I will explain the reasons for
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 and how
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 tendency has some negative effects.
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, mass production from factories produces more product options for consumers. If the
people
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 who broke their
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 even replaced the
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 for some reason, they can purchase a new item easily from grocery stores or e-commerce websites.
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, many
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 have to repair by professionals who have special equipment and facilities at a higher price.
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, the tools for repairing consumer electronic
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 as speakers and headphones are special and professional knowledge is needed. Even repairing the item is more expensive than buying a new product.
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, many
people
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 do become accustomed to throwing away the crashed stuff.
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, the advertisements
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 as a strong persuasion to hypnotise
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 into buying new goods.
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,
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 have more options to replace their old and broken
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instead
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 of repairing and refurbishing them. The most important consequence of
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 behaviour is that all the raw and natural materials
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 as trees, metal and fossil fuels are consumed quickly which destroys the global ecology system.
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, more industrial waste is produced come at a huge cost to the governments to process abandoned
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 and non-degradable materials. It will be a burden for governments and green organisations to solve the pollution problems and rise a large expenditure. In conclusion, several potential reasons cause
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 phenomenon, and it brings negative impacts
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 our future.
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