Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree

#people #choices

We live in a world where anything and everything we want can be bought within seconds, with a touch on

your

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our

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mobile phone. Internet and new methods of advertising have brought the world together

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one single market. It allows us to select our needs according to our preferences. The ability to choose anything we want, the way we like is a blessing. It makes us happy and makes our lives colourful.

For example

, if one wants to buy a frock

you

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can select it from any shop in any country

who

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provides the necessary delivery facilities. And

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applies to most of the things that we need in our lives now including Food,

clothe

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, holiday destinations etc. But some believe that having too many

choice

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choices

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can become a problem. Some find it difficult to come to a decision, when there are too many options available ,and they become scared to make a mistake.

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, some find it comfortable when they have anyone or two options to select from.

For example

, when selecting a career, if your parent insist you

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select a specific job, and you have no other option, you can make up your mind and pursue it. But, if your parents ask you to select any employment you want

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apply

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unless you really know what you want, you will be in a

real

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stressful situation.

However

, in conclusion, I think that it is best to have many choices to select anything from. But to choose wisely, one needs to know what

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one

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really want and how to select.

Submitted by subhasamudri on Wed Jan 04 2023

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