Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Online
education
is becoming more and more popular especially covid-19 throughout the period and the majority
people
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of people
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say that online
education
will replace face-to-face
education
soon. In my
opinion
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online
education
is
very
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important thing for
people
. Some
people
prefer to learn something
such
as math,
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by
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online
education
and so on and cause
of
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some
people
choose online
education
, online
education
is
more
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important thing because they save more time and it is comfortable
besides
that it
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.
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, some
people
do not claim e-learning cause
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it has some kinds of bad aspect and they say that when teacher teach during the lesson teacher don’t control student
such
as their behaviour
besides
that
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teacher do not know
student
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if student
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understand the lesson
that is
why face-to-face
education
is beneficial for students. To conclude, lots of
people
claim online
education
because
of
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it is comfortable for
they
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however
some
people
prefer
to
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face-to-face
education
. In my opinion Online
education
is beneficial for
people
cause
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of
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students may learn something
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foreign
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a foreign
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country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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