Online education is becoming more and more popular.Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon.Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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famous.Some human beings believe that e-learning has so more and more useful sides that it will replace face-to-face
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online
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have these things,they cannot learn online
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school despite being bad weather. Having weighed everything mentioned up,I can come to
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conclusion that all things have many good sides and harmful sides
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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