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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that instructing young generations through
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modern technologies and the
internet
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 more beneficial than face-to-face learning, while others believe that
traditional
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 teaching
system
 is more suitable for
students
. In my opinion, e-learning is better learning
system
 rather than traditional
one
. On the
one
 hand, a number of people believe that teaching
students
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internet
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system
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students
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certain lectures or courses at any time and in everywhere since
this
 teaching method creates a number of opportunities for humans to find more useful
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 through social media platforms.
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 by
students
,
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 nowadays majority of the online lectures and courses are taking place on
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system
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On the other hand
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 traditional education is irreplaceable since online education can not create an educational environment for
students
 and
also
 in face-to-face education
students
 will be able to ask and get feedback.
Furthermore
, to attend online classes or courses humans ought to possess a mobile device and an
internet
 connection,
however
, in most villages the
internet
 is not available.
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, I can come to the conclusion
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that, despite some obvious disadvantages of e-learning, it has
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 as well since it gives a number of opportunities for youngsters to study more properly
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 the aid of social media platforms.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • e-Learning
  • face-to-face education
  • remote learning
  • virtual classroom
  • webinar
  • digital platform
  • self-paced learning
  • interactive learning
  • course accessibility
  • academic networking
  • pedagogy
  • synchronous/asynchronous sessions
  • MOOCs (Massive Open Online Courses)
  • edtech (educational technology)
  • holistic development
  • practical skills
  • collaborative learning
  • digital divide
  • curriculum adaptation
  • technological literacy
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