Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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modern technologies and the

internet

is gaining more and more reputation year by year and

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more beneficial than face-to-face learning, while others believe that

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teaching

system

is more suitable for

students

. In my opinion, e-learning is better learning

system

rather than traditional

one

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hand, a number of people believe that teaching

students

through the

internet

has so many advantageous sides since by utilizing

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kind of teaching

system

,

students

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certain lectures or courses at any time and in everywhere since

this

teaching method creates a number of opportunities for humans to find more useful

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through social media platforms.

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of data and

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by

students

,

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nowadays majority of the online lectures and courses are taking place on

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platform as an online

system

of learning.

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, some individuals think that

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traditional education is irreplaceable since online education can not create an educational environment for

students

and

also

in face-to-face education

students

will be able to ask and get feedback.

Furthermore

, to attend online classes or courses humans ought to possess a mobile device and an

internet

connection,

however

, in most villages the

internet

is not available.

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of the children who live in

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countryside tend to attend traditional classes as an impact of unavailable

internet

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, I can come to the conclusion

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that, despite some obvious disadvantages of e-learning, it has

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a considerable advantages

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as well since it gives a number of opportunities for youngsters to study more properly

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the aid of social media platforms.