Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon.Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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believe that distance learning is more advantageous compare to offline schooling which is

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considered to be restored in recent days. While a few others believe that

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the initial statement is one of the most appropriate in

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the course of the essay. On the one hand, as it is practical and economical, digital training is used extensively due to the fact that it gives

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toddlers the chance to pursue their studies without having to worry about travel. As

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, students are offered seminars in the convenience of their residence, increasing efficiency that would have

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been used for rush hour. According to

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, virtual education is

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regarded as cost-effective. They shouldn't need to splurge on tuition because they get the same standard of education for less money since it does not require any equipment.

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because of the available platforms.

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experience. Given the ongoing engagement with the professor, instructional methods encourage students to develop superior

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, including arranging and obtaining trustworthy information, which leads to higher grades.

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assists in acquiring core competency.

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to gaining actual skills. In conclusion,even if schooling could seem desirable in terms of accessibility and affordability, instructional practices.

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, I believe that in-person instruction cannot be substituted.