Some people believe that using a bicycle as main from of transportation has a lot of advantages, while others think that it has many disadvantages. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There are different opinions about that nowadays, some people prefer using a bicycle
instead
of driving. While some argue that it has a lot of benefits. Others claim that it has many drawbacks to their life. I believe that if they use a bicycle, they will
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friendly
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transportation. To commence with
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on the former group, there are two reasons behind their position.
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is that the main advantage of using a bicycle is that it is convenient to ride
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as compared to other motorbikes and can easily get repaired.
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, they
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advantage which is
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tone muscle,
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can not only be environmentally but
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help people to maintain a healthy lifestyle. In order to have consistent exercise during the day.
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other arguments exist too, but the
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mentioned, I believe, do stand out. Turning to the letter group's point of
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they do have their own group to justify the position they hold,
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one of the disadvantages of cycling is
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it can be dangerous at times. Since cyclists can easily make their way through busy
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they are more tend to
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road accidents because
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some drivers may not see them.
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, recently my friend had an accident because
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he was riding the cycle when a car bumped into
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him.
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he was injured. The ability of their arguments is undeniable but mentioning them is not worthy. In conclusion, bike riding definitely has it is advantages which is
this
it may decrease the ozone layer depletion of harmful gases in the atmosphere which may cause serious health diseases like cancer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • carbon emissions
  • motorized vehicles
  • traffic congestion
  • cost-effective
  • sense of community
  • harsh weather conditions
  • road accidents
  • physical disabilities
  • sustainable practices
  • health benefits
  • infrastructure
  • feasible option
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