Every country in the world has its road rules but many drivers don't obey them. Why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

Every country has

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own road

rules

. Freight laws are important in each country because they need for their safety. Meanwhile, the chauffeur liked to ignore them every time. The main cause of

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problem as well as a few solutions will be discussed in

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nowadays and hurried up, like some humans might be late and in a hurry, go to work or meet an appointment,

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the laws on road.

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happened everywhere,

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daily

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basis.

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use

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during driving. As well as, they like to find to

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-minute speed up driving when the traffic light started to turn red.

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they do not follow the signboard when they are driving

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the main artery.

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the other hand, one of the best

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is that they have to pay a tine the

government

if they break the

rules

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, if the

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imposes a high penalty on them, they will have to obey general

rules

. It brings profit

the

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government

. Another solution is that the police should take driver's

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back because many drivers do not know about the traffic

rules

. That's why

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many accidents happen

because of

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them.

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, they need to learn the freight laws again. In conclusion, everybody must follow traffic

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to avoid an accident

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. Both the

government

and individuals are responsible for

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2Word repetition
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Introduction & conclusion present

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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Every country in the world has its road rules but many drivers don't obey them. Why is this happening? What can be done to solve this problem?

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