It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instances for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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. It is often seen that some human beings have natural abilities whilst others
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of the views and give my opinion. Youngsters have natural skills in their hobbies without being given any
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as they feel confident in achieving their
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. They feel that they could uplift themselves and
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participate in various competitions. Without any proper
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individuals could do well in a specific event on what they are
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can play football without any
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for their goals. Youngsters seek
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. Nobody is born with special talents
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they would be able to master in their skill. They often would not be interested in the particular hobby
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would find it tedious as they believe that they have mastered their capacity. In Conclusion, An individual must seek for
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to master their ability. In my opinion, every child must be given proper facilities that
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interests in their hobbies
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • innate talent
  • predisposition
  • genetics
  • psychology
  • natural abilities
  • disciplined practice
  • child prodigy
  • rigorous training
  • stimulating environment
  • nurturing talents
  • perseverance
  • dedicated effort
  • compensate
  • initial advantage
  • inherent ability
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