The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

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The

first

line graph shows the percentage of households that own three different types of electrical appliances over a period of one hundred years and the

second

shows the number of hours spent per week on household chores during that same period. Overall, ownership of those three appliances increased and the amount of time spent on chores decreased. In 1920, which was the

first

year recorded, almost no one owned a refrigerator, whilst a

third

of people had a vacuum cleaner and four out of ten had a washing machine.

This

changed drastically over the

decades, with almost every household possessing a fridge by 1980. Indeed, by 1960 it had already surpassed the other two appliances to become the most commonly owned of the three. In the final year, 2019, every household had both a fridge and vacuum, but washing machines, which had been the most common in 1920, were now the least common with just three-quarters of households owning one. During

this

time frame, the number of hours spent on chores dropped from fifty hours per week to about ten, with a steep decline in the

first

few decades, followed by a slower fall from 1980 onwards.

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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Variety in linking words

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Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework and households in one country between 1920 and 2019.

Include an introduction and conclusion

Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries?

Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children’s development than playing computer games. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Many people spend less time in their homes. What do you think are the reasons? what effects does it have on individuals and the society?

Some people believe that time spent on television and computer games can valuable for children. Other believe this has negative impact on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.