countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

There is an upward trend in the modern world
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being much more global.
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, society
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to examine
of
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whether
this
trend has advantages or not. In fact, human
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should keep going in
this
way due to being a global
citizen
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and establishing more reachable facilities
to
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everyone.
This
argument connects with being a citizen
over
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the
countries
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. In
the
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light of
this
vision, folks can utilize
from
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global emotions and
common
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language. Consider how music can connect
humanbeing
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human beings
,
create
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strong friendships.
In addition
to the previous point,
the
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global
products
can give us a chance to use
a
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commen
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common
facilities
such
as social media. Nowadays, we can keep in touch with a friend from overseas, we can learn some useful items from different continents thanks to
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of
products
. Using global items and sharing common emotions present only a few reasons for utilization from being global. Yes, the points mentioned above offer strong arguments, but
also
consider establishing more reachable
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features
for
humanbeing
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human being
human beings
. Most
of
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the
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global companies
such
as Starbucks,
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and Mcdonalds
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Mcdonalds
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Mcdonald's
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offer
to
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consumers cheaper
products
while local shops and restaurants ask
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amount
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amounts
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of money.
This
is because a global
companies
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budget is strong enough to compete
others
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with others
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.
For instance
, if a person from Turkey goes to
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and
order
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orders
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a meal
in
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mcdonalts
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McDonalds
McDonald's
, that man probably will know whether he can afford
this
meal or not. While
this
point does resonate well, accessing
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healthy
health
food is a significant point for most
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the
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people. Some
countries
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legislation does not cover a certification system to check all the shops
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sell food. In
this
case, it might be hard to eat outside for a human who has a high level of
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awareness
. All in all, health and budget reasons are
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acceptable
points to being more global rather than
to support
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local areas. Discussions on being conservative or being global
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serious controversy, but supportive elements demand
such
a
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action. Being
global
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citizen
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and more
accesable
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accessible
products
have been suggesting effective solutions for decades.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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