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Happiness if often considered difficult to define. Why is this? What factors determine happiness?

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Of course, every person wants to be happy and feel it always. But, no one knows how to define it, because they do not know that they are happy at the moment,
people
 just remember when they were happy.
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, it is because of
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people
 do not think about factors of
happiness
 which are a lot. Both views will be discussed in
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Happiness
 is complex to define because it does not have any formula to get it. Nobody knows when others are happy and how to make them happy, since each person has his own way to take
happiness
 and when it can be.
For instance
, someone may become happy, when he reaches the mountains, while another one needs to wake up to be happy. Despite the fact that these factors may not exist, science has a lot of basics, which are needed by everyone. The Pyramid of Maslow presents us, where it has
such
 factors that are needed by
people
 in any requirements. There are
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 physiology, safety, socialization, confession, knowledge, esthetics and reaching goals, where each of these parameters
are
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 located above
each
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 other.
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, German scientists
find
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 that
people
 from the lowest classes need only the bottom parts
from
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this
 pyramid, while the higher classes
people
,
such
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 famous persons, millionaires and others want to reach things at the top of
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Maslow’s pyramid. In conclusion, it is really hard to define
happiness
, because
people
 do not know when others can be happy and they only can suppose its ways
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • subjective
  • complex
  • embrace
  • vary
  • definition
  • material possessions
  • achievements
  • personal values
  • relationships
  • self-fulfillment
  • psychological
  • physiological
  • genetics
  • predispositions
  • cultural
  • societal
  • perception
  • pursuit
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