You have seen an advertisement in the local newspaper for swimming lessons at your community sports centre. You want to find out more about these lessons. Write a letter to the manager of the sports centre. . Describe how well you can swim at the moment . Explain why you want to learn to swim better . Enquire about the time and cost of the swimming lessons

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Dear Sir, I am writing to want the information about the swimming classes offered by the sports centre. As an
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I am not in water sports.
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, during my ,education I participated in most of the sports. but I could not get a chance to take part in it. Actually, as a health-conscious person, I perfect to do physical activities to keep myself fit.
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swimming is one of them. It is scientifically proven that those who swim twice a week have fewer chances to struggle with stress or depression. On top of ,that it burns more calories with
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. Undoubtedly it keeps me more fit in my hectic schedule.
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, I am highly interested to join the classes. But the advertisement I saw on the template has not given me much information about timings and cost. Which is a major point to decide whether. Am I capable to register myself or not? So please provide me with all the details. With regards. Mani Singh
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