Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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growth in the

economy

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is

essential

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the essential

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objective of any

nation

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.

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, few opine that

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various other

factors

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must

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be considered for the development of a respective

nation

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. I believe, for the prosperous future of the country and its

citizens

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,

progressive

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economy

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must have

equivalent

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focus on all the essential

factors

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including economic progress. A section of society definitely supports that having a strong

economy

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will surely help to augment the citizen's quality of life in ample ways by having more inflow of money in the

nation

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. Indeed government of

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such

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country

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a country

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can invest funds

at

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in

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various sectors

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as employment generation, health facilities, education sector and numerous amenities, which not only helps to flourish the societies but individuals as well by enjoying and availing the facilities. Certainly, residents are more likely to have the ability

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better income generation as well as

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taxes.

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, a thriving

economy

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provides all the lucrative opportunities to its

citizens

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to have a satisfied and prosperous life. Contrastingly, several other

factors

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also

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contribute

for

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the progressive

economy

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Though, according to the present scenario saving the environment must be the essential priority of every

nation

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. Absolutely,

by

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making effort to reduce the increasing pollution and controlling

accumulation

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of

debrizwould

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debris would

be an effective strategy to develop the

nation

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. Undoubtedly, implementing rules for proper waste management practices and utilization of

eco friendly

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resources reduces the effect of environmental pollution

of

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citizens

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and societies. At

same

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time effects of

life-threating

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life-threatening

diseases like asthma,

cardiovascular

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and cardiovascular

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issues among all

the

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age groups can be minimized.

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, preserving

environment

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makes the countries more survivable for inhabitants by reducing mortality

rate

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and health hazards. Positively,

aim

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to be a healthy society can be achieved. I believe

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none of the

factors

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can be ignored while considering the success of a thriving

economy

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.

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,

appropriate

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budget must be allocated by the government authorities for various sectors according to available funds in the

nation

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for

betterment

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the betterment

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of

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nation

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the nation

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and its

citizens

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. To conclude, a productive citizen is

the

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asset

of

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every

nation

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and assuredly contributes in every way

for

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to

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the

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apply

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econoric

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economic

progress. So, the ultimate aim

for

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becoming a powerful

economy

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can only be possible by giving importance to all the

factors

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.