It is said that day-by-day people’s lives are becoming increasingly stressful. What are the reasons behind that? What can be done to solve this problem?

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said, the purpose of human life is
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for happiness. In
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is getting increased.
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that can happen to one's life. Even Plenty of cases end with
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depression. One of the
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to employees. Most
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employers
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the employers
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give a lot of
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to
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it can cause tension together with long hours of work. If it
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continously
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stress
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Another reason is
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of awareness of how important
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lifestyle is. Inside a
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healthy
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there is a
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healthy
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,
people
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balance and
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regular exercise,
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their lives more
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rather than
people
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the other hand,
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to
this
stress
issue is easy, yet hard to do.
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, nowadays
people
need to
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work-life
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balance.
for example
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every three months.
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,
people
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to
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their
stress
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summarize
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,
stress
could happen to anyone.
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not mean
this
problem can not be solved.
this
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stress
and how to avoid
stress
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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