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The crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?

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In
this
 contemporary era,in many nations adolescents are getting indulge in doing wrong deeds.There are ample
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reasons behind
this
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This
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causes
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 of
aforementioned
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 statement and will give
few
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 measures to mitigate the issue with a logical conclusion. To commence with, there are a plethora of reasons , why
crime
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 rate is increasing
day
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day
 among
children's
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children
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. The
first
 and foremost is,due to
impact
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the impact
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 of media.To be more precise,programs and movies which shows
different
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a different
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 type of offences done by individuals in order to become rich throws an impact on teenagers and they tried to copy the same method and get indulge in
wrong doings
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.
Moreover
, among teenagers showoff plays a vital role .To elaborate
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,children want to show
to
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their peer groups how much they are popular and to maintain
this
 popularity they get indulge in
crime
 to spread
threat
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 among others and able to
reserve
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preserve
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 their position in
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society.
Therefore
,these are some reasons which are responsible for
increasing
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the increasing
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 rate of
crime
 like robbery,murders,
burglary
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and burglary
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 among youngsters. As every lock has
key
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a key
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,
likewise
 every problem has
solution
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a solution
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. To curb the aforementioned issues some measures can be taken.
Firstly
,parents should spend time with their
offsprings
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 so that they can able to keep an eye on them ,
what
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and what
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 they are watching on television.
Furthermore
, they should guide them
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 is wrong and what is right by inculcating moral values among them.
Secondly
, wellbeings should encourage their wards to see discovery channel and other inspirational films and serials so that they can able to grab knowledge and
also
 learn good things.
For example
,in a recent survey,conducted by
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 control department,in the year 2012,the findings revealed that 70
percent
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 of teenagers who are growing
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up
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under
observation
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the observation
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 of their parents are far away from
crime
. After pondering over
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 great deal of thoughts,I come to the conclusion that
although
crime
 among children is increasing
day
 by
day
 because of
influence
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 of media ,
but
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with the help of parents
by
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giving time to their youngsters ,
this
 problem can be solved.
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