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Some students take one year off between school and university. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?

#students #year #school #university
Nowadays, speaking about the gap, which could be roughly 1 year after completing school prior to enrolling in collages, is one of the contemporary controversies regarding advocates believing
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 experiences and qualifications, which might be acquired during that period and disputers arguing detrimental drawbacks which should not be ignored; take the butterfly effect as
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 patently obvious example. In
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 various aspects of different lessons, not only the 1-year period would not bite, but may
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 career, the better technics and methods are able to learn, and
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In addition
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no longer suffer from the lack of
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 in terms of more qualifications.
On the other hand
, 1-year gap before initiating
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graduation or graduation studies is neither so short nor too
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important so as to play a significant
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 in students’ future plans.
To begin
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this
 period could be harmful and have some disadvantageous effects in regard to some phenomena
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 disturbing items among those courses might make the focus and concentration worse. In conclusion, in spite of the fact that many
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 getting useful lessons, I strongly believe that
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 should not be passed so easily.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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