Many people are using credit cards or loans to run up huge personal debts that they may be unable to repay. It should, therefore, be made more difficult for individuals to borrow large amounts of money. What are your opinions on this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your knowledge or experience.

Personal
debt
is one of the problems that has widely stirred up
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controversy. The accumulating
debt
could lead the person to be bankrupt eventually due to a lack of payback ability. I strongly agree that some complicated process should be applied to the loaners, borrowing money from any financial
institutions
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to ensure that they can pay back. In
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essay, the views will be discussed and my personal experiences will be given.
Firstly
, personal
debt
is an indicator to show where the
country
's economic status is at. The higher the debts are, the worst situation the
country
's economy is facing. According to the World Bank research, the
country
with
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of
middle-class
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the middle-class
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population has a high tendency
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personal loan ratio
than
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since their spending
behavior
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is likely to overspend especially on high-involvement products
such
as real estate, or cars. The COVID-19 pandemic is
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of
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a great example to explain the situation. We have seen many countries gain higher bad
debt
because the lenders, as known as financial institutions, cannot collect the money back to the system and the government has to subsidize those debts
instead
of investing in something else ,
for example
, health care service expansion or research for COVID-19 vaccination.
In addition
, getting money too
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will create
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bad spending habit
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the person. They will perceive that they can spend on whatever they desire without re-considering if it is necessary
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their living.
This
is not just only about the
country
's
economic
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as mentioned above but it is one of the causes that will affect
environment
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. The higher demand, the higher production,
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more environment will be destroyed. Giving the example,
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more numbers of cars on the road will generate
higher
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amount of air pollution. In conclusion, banks or related organizations should provide a condition for a high amount of loan to guarantee that the loaners have the financial ability to fully pay back on time and to save the environment.
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