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Fossil fuels are the main source of energy in many countries. However, in some countries, alternative sources of energy are encouraged. Do you think this is positive or negative development?

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The diagram shows the detailed process of making a negative picture from step to step. In the
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 stage, you need a camera. Images are captured and recorded onto a film. All leading steps will happen in a dark room.
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 with, the primary process of the film is developed from the camera. Once the action is completed the
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 stage is washed in a development tank in a darkroom. When negative is produced in an enlarger, where images can be enlarged and edited. Images can be printed on photographic paper. The prints are developed, fixed, washed, and dried in a chemical bath. In the
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 stage, black and white photos can be removed from the dark room. Overall, we can see that we need three major steps involved in the making of black-and-white photos.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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