"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

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Letter You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. I am writing to let you know that I have recently changed my

job

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and I really like it. I hope we would be able to meet soon and we would

spending

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spend

be spending

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an exsiting

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exsiting

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exciting

time together. Though

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am I

was I

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professionally satisfied with my previous

job

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, it was hard

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for

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for

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balance my professional and personal life. I must say that

this

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place is absolutely amazing and the people are friendly, kind and

accomodating

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accommodating

accommodation

. I liked my previous

job

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but had been stuck in the same position for a long and was not getting many chances to

further

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my career. That's

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the way

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way

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why

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I changed my

job

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. So far, I am enjoying my life here and all the new experiences. I hope you could visit us soon. I look forward to knowing what you are doing these days. Please write me back at your convenience. I am eagerly waiting to hear from you soon. Warm wishes,

Sevinch

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

Dear + name
Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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Word repetition
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

171 words

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"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

The Greeting

Whether or not someone achieves their aims is mostly by a question of luck.To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Some people believe that it is better to live in the countryside, while others believe that living in a city is more beneficial. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The tendency that news reports in media focus on problems and emergencies rather than on positive developments is harmful for individuals and the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In many countries, some people earn very high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country. Others believe that the government should not allow people to earn salaries above a certain level. Discuss both views and give your opinion.