"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

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friend, You know that I started working in a new company a few weeks ago . The reason I am writing you

this

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letter is I

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am inroduce

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inroduce

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introduce

you

with

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my new

job

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Firstly

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, I am beginning

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letter with why I changed my

the

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latest

job

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. Because my old

job

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was very boring and holiday entitlement only in one day .

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, I was not well paid . So I left that

job

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, my new

job

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is very amazing . I am a translator at the British embassy. Everything is fine for me here . I earn enough money

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this

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place .

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, I have a good team . I have

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some

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new information .

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, I am going to London for training .

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, I will stay there for two years . After that , I will return to Uzbekistan. At that time, I am going to bring a gift for you . If you learn

English

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language, I will invite you to London.

Your

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sincerely, SARDOR UTKIROV Sardor O'tkirov

asqar4997Fri Jan 06 2023

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

180 words

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