"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

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friend, You know that I started working in a new company a few weeks ago . The reason I am writing you

this

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letter is I

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am inroduce

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inroduce

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introduce

you

with

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my new

job

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Firstly

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, I am beginning

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letter with why I changed my

the

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latest

job

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. Because my old

job

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was very boring and holiday entitlement only in one day .

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, I was not well paid . So I left that

job

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Nevertheless

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, my new

job

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is very amazing . I am a translator at the British embassy. Everything is fine for me here . I earn enough money

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this

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place .

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, I have a good team . I have

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some

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new information .

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, I am going to London for training .

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, I will stay there for two years . After that , I will return to Uzbekistan. At that time, I am going to bring a gift for you . If you learn

English

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language, I will invite you to London.

Your

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sincerely, SARDOR UTKIROV Sardor O'tkirov

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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9 paragraphs

180 words

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"You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter, • explain why you changed jobs • describe your new job • tell him / her your other news Write at least 150 words."

Some argue that schools are no longer necessary because children learn so much from the Internet and can be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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University education should be free for all stuents.To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Why do many people visit museums when they travel to different countries or cities?