Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school. However, others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion
There are many others
suggest
that international Correct pronoun usage
who suggest
news
compulsory
for Add a missing verb
is compulsory
educated
as a Correct article usage
the educated
subject
. But others belive
that it is wasting pupil Correct your spelling
believe
school
time. I strongly believe that all pupils
learn as a subject
for international news
.
On the one hand, there are many benefit
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benefits
would
get Correct pronoun usage
that would
pupils
when they learned international news
. Fristly
, They can Correct your spelling
Firstly
First
educated
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educate
global
economy, because of globalization many Correct article usage
the global
news
published with
Change preposition
about
world
economy. Add an article
the world
its
good for the student who Replace the word
it's
it is
planning
to Change the form of the verb
plans
business
in future. Add a missing verb
do business
Secondly
, another main topic published by media
is Correct article usage
the media
a crime
Remove the article
crime news
a piece of crime news
news
. Those who are keen to work in law industries they
could gain valuable knowledge.
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apply
on the other hand
, some majority believe that it is waste
of Correct article usage
a waste
the
Correct article usage
apply
school
time. Because pupils
have many subject
to learn where they were in Change to a plural noun
subjects
school
. For example
. in Sri lankan
secondary schools have been teaching Change the capitalization
Lankan
Lanka
for
student common Change preposition
apply
subject
Fix the agreement mistake
subjects
such
as,
English, maths, science, Remove the comma
apply
art.
because they believe that Correct word choice
and art.
gain
knowledge Wrong verb form
gaining
with
that academic Change preposition
in
subject
compulsory for their life and would be get
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get
good
job when they Change the article
a good
leaving
Wrong verb form
leave
school
. In addition
, when they learn about world crime it might be
influence Unnecessary verb
apply
to
the Change preposition
apply
pupil
mind. because international Change noun form
pupil's
news
contains with
those topics. some Change preposition
apply
news
are
valuable and some Change the verb form
is
of
are useless.
In conclusion, Many people like to include international Change preposition
apply
news
as a
academic Change the article
an
subject
in secondary school
because pupils
hhave
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have
better
future Correct article usage
a better
on
that, but some people believe that it waisting Change preposition
in
school
time and effect to
the Change preposition
apply
pupils
behaviour. Change to a genitive case
pupil's
pupils'
Finally
, i
believe that including international Change the capitalization
I
news
as a college
Add a comma
,college
subject
is a
necessary.Change the article
apply
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