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Some people suggest that international news should study as a subject in secondary school. However, others say that it will be a waste of valuable school time. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #news #study #school #waste #time
There are many others
suggest
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who suggest
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 that international
news
compulsory
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is compulsory
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 for
educated
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the educated
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 as a
subject
. But others
belive
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believe
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 that it is wasting pupil
school
 time. I strongly believe that all
pupils
 learn as a
subject
 for international
news
. On the one hand, there are many
benefit
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benefits
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would
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that would
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 get
pupils
 when they learned international
news
.
Fristly
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Firstly
First
, They can
educated
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educate
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global
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the global
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 economy, because of globalization many
news
 published
with
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about
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world
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the world
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 economy.
its
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it's
it is
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 good for the student who
planning
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plans
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 to
business
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do business
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 in future.
Secondly
, another main topic published by
media
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the media
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 is
a crime
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crime news
a piece of crime news
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news
. Those who are keen to work in law industries
they
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apply
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could gain valuable knowledge.
on the other hand
, some majority believe that it is
waste
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a waste
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 of
the
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apply
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school
 time. Because
pupils
 have many
subject
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subjects
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 to learn where they were in
school
.
For example
. in Sri
lankan
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Lankan
Lanka
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 secondary schools have been teaching
for
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apply
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student common
subject
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subjects
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such
 as
,
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apply
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 English, maths, science,
art.
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and art.
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 because they believe that
gain
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gaining
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 knowledge
with
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in
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 that academic
subject
 compulsory for their life and would
be get
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get
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good
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a good
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 job when they
leaving
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leave
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school
.
In addition
, when they learn about world crime it might
be
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apply
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influence
to
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apply
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the
pupil
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pupil's
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 mind. because international
news
 contains
with
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apply
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those topics. some
news
are
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is
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 valuable and some
of
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apply
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are useless. In conclusion, Many people like to include international
news
 as
a
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an
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 academic
subject
 in secondary
school
 because
pupils
hhave
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have
better
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a better
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 future
on
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in
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 that, but some people believe that it waisting
school
 time and effect
to
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apply
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the
pupils
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pupil's
pupils'
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 behaviour.
Finally
,
i
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I
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 believe that including international
news
 as a
college
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,college
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subject
 is
a
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apply
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necessary.
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