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A magazine wants to include contribution from its readers for an article called 'the book that influenced me most". Write a letter to the editor of the magazine about the book that influences you most. In your letter, •describe what this book was about, •explain how this book influenced you, •say whether this book would be likely to influence other people

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Dear Sir, I am writing to contribute to the article 'The
book
 that
influlenced
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influenced
 me the most' with my personal opinion and taste. When I was a teenager I read a
book
 called "Rich
dad
 vs Poor
dad
". The
writter
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writer
 explains the differences in personal values from different class wages people and how
this
 impact the raising of their children and the environment where they
grown
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.
Also
, a very important part of the
book
 talks about how important
are
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the values given to
certains
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certain
 things in our
childrenhood
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childhood
children hood
,
such
 as family, friends and feelings. At the time, when I read the
book
, I had some heartbreaking memories about my growing-up phase and a few
regreats
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regrets
 about my relationship with my
dad
. Reading the
book
 made me reflect
about
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 how much my
dad
 gave to me in relation to love and care, and made me realise that he gave all of his soul,
although
 he could not give me expensive things,
such
 as a new Barbie or a trip to Paris.
Finally
, I believe the
book
 could help other readers to find clarity about their loved ones and their raise, and
also
 help others with the development of what they want to pass on to their children. In reality, everyone can learn when they look inside and reflect
about
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theirselfs
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their selfs
themself
. Best regards,
Submitted by miro.rados on

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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