Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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from
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place to another has become
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, faster and cheaper, and the same we can state about learning about different cities and countries or even looking for a new job or career.
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, many adults choose to stay where they were born to study, work and
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raise their
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.
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, there are a few incentives to study and work in a place you are familiar with because you know what are the best school, you have easier
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access
to information and people reviews,
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have friends and contacts to help you with whatever you might need and the most import thing, you have your family support. Moving elsewhere might lead you to situations where you are out of your
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comfort
zone and without
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support
, and most people would rather avoid those
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of situations.
Secondly
, there are a few
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advantages
and disadvantages we can point out about moving or not when we grow up. Starting a new life somewhere else may give you new opportunities,
such
as a great job opportunity or meeting the love of your life.
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, a new country perhaps may offer you
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infraestructure
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infrastructure
or lifestyle.
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, there are some negative points as well
such
as lack of support and friends around
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difficulties with different cultures and habits that can impact your personal
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and sometimes even affect
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mental health. In conclusion, there are facilities
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surrounding
making a living
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the place you were born
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the fact of having to let go
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experiences you could have by making your own path in a new country. Choosing
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where
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to spend your life and create roots is a challenging decision that
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involves
a lot of thinking and
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weighting
weighing
of positive and negative points.
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  • Familiarity
  • Comfort
  • Social ties
  • Family ties
  • Belonging
  • Resources
  • Opportunities
  • Fear
  • Unknown
  • Financial constraints
  • Cultural attachment
  • Language barriers
  • Limited education
  • Skills
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