Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In some states, for

people

to buy a

house

is

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instead

to rent one.

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essay considers a positive statement

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because to have

an

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ownership

it

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means to have stability and safety, which in our days is difficult to obtain

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because

people

don’t have enough money to buy a

house

and

to

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reach their goals.

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is a positive statement

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because having a

house

it

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means a safe place, where nobody will take it from them.

People

can do whatever they want

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and can modify the whole layout of the

house

. The comfort level is up to them and nobody cares what

color

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are the walls. It’s important to mention that they don’t need to waste their money

for

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renting a home.

People

can invest

them

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in other things and prosper in their life.

The stability

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and safety mean that nobody will kick them out

from

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their

house

,

instead

in a rented one, the owner can do it.

Also

, he can increase the rent price, playing with his rules.

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, I’m renting an apartment for five years and I need to live

in

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with

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a broken roof and

with

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mold

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on the walls, but my owner doesn’t care about

this

problem. So, I need to support all of these consequences till I’ll leave the place.

To buy

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Buy

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a

house

instead

to rent

it

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might be a case

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because a home is a superb tax shelter. The most practical solution to

this

problem is a high salary, which can help

people

to achieve their desires and goals.

Although

the price to buy a

house

is significantly high, the government should invest by increasing

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salaries and reducing taxes. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of

misbehavior

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and, hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public.

For example

, the United Kingdom recently lobbied their citizens to teach their children about the importance of respecting teachers, which resulted in a dramatic improvement. In summary, widespread negative

behavior

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behaviour

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in the classroom has been caused by caregivers not instilling the values of deference and civility in their offspring;

however

,

this

can be tackled through a public education program that promotes these values. It is

also

recommended that

people

should attend parenting classes before their child starts kindergarten.