[Diagram - CB 16 test 4] shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

The diagram displays the
process
for recycling
plastic
bottles
. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that
this
process
is circular and involves nine stages.
Addtionally
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Additionally
, the used
plastic
bottles
can be reproduced
to
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other product types.
First
of all, after the used
plastic
bottles
are thrown in the recycling garbage, the special truck
collect
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and
transport
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transports
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them to
recycling
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a recycling
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plant. After
that
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they are sorted to select only
plastic
bottles
that can be recycled.
Then
the special machine is
opereated
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operated
to compress those
bottles
into blocks before they are crushed
to
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into
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small pieces and washed. The
next
process
is to produce
plastic
pellets by
put
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washed small pieces of
plastic
in the special machine.
Next
,
plastic
pellets
is
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are
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heated to form raw material.
Then
it can be used to produce many commercial products, including
bottle
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bottles
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,
T-shirt
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T-shirts
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,
bag
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bags
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and container
package
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packages
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.
Then
the
process
is repeated after consumers used and put it in the recycling bin.
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