Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course.

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The following pie chart represents the carrier path chosen by Anthropology graduates from one university after completing their undergraduate degree course and the table shows the salaries of the working Anthropologists after 5 years. A large number of anthropology
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i.e., around 52% work a full-time job after their graduation. 15% are doing a part-time job and 5% of the
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are doing their postgraduation along with a part-time job. 8% of the
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opted for a full-time postgrad study while 12% are still unemployed. The table gives us information about three types of employment and the percentage of people falling into a particular income slab. There are 4 different categories $25,000-49,999, $50,000-74,999, $75,000-99,999 and the
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we have Freelance consultants with 5% of people earning between $25,000-$49,999, 15% earning $50,000-74,999, 40% earning between $75,000-99,999, and the
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40% having an income above $100,000. The
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type is the government sector in which 5% fall in the
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slab, 15% in the
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, 30 % fall under the
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and 50% in the fourth. The
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employment type is private companies which have 10% of the
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earning between $25,000-$49,999, 35% between $50,000-74,999, 25% have a salary between $75,000-99,999 and
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30% earning above $100,000. At ,
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we can say that we compared the percentage of
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in different carrier paths and the amount of salary they earn after 5 years of work in different sectors.

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