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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, many pieces of
language
 are disappearing. It is believed by some
people
 that the disappearance of any type of
language
 is not a significant matter since they argue that the fewer languages that exist in the world, the easier life would be. Personally, I opine
this
 view and will explain my opinion with examples towards
this
 essay. On one hand, there are plenty of factors contributing towards the idea that having globally fewer kinds of languages leads to an easy way of living.
First
 of all, all humans around the world benefit from
this
 phenomenon when they decide to travel for any reason.
For example
, tourists will be able to visit more countries and regions easily if both travellers and citizens share the same
language
.
This
 is because communication and interaction will be eased.
Secondly
, more numbers of
people
 can work internationally in different nations since they do not need to pick up the new
language
 of the host country in order to have a job there as they have similar lingo. So having widely-spoken terminology
spreading
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 in more countries will be beneficial for
people
 around the whole world.
However
,
on the other hand
, there are some
people
 who think that every country should have their own
language
 and none of them should not be extinct.
This
 is because they may be fanatical about their own dialect and
language
 and attempt to maintain it at any price, just for the sense of patriotism.
Moreover
, they believed that their
language
 is traced to their culture and their ancestors and they do not want it to be eradicated .
As a result
, they can experience a sense of identity by insisting on keeping their ancient
language
. All in all, despite the fact that many languages are eliminating these days and there are voices of disagreement towards
this
 disappearing, I strongly believe that it will be effective for
people
 in numerous situations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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