The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly

money

is the deciding factor in the selection of a

job

. Many

people

believe high

income

allows them to provide financial security for themselves and their families. Whether or not

money

is

an

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significant factor for choosing a

job

, considering each

person

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interest. In

this

essay

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essay,

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I will give my opinion and describe why

do

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I agree

whit

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with

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this

statement.

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whit

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the importance of

money

in society is unavoidable. So most of the

people

goes

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after careers with high incomes.

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it’s a wise decision to make.

Career

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with high salaries, probably won’t need

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time

of

work

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and

also

you may provide yourself less difficult life.

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each career has its own difficulty and even in choosing

following

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job

people

should consider their interests as well.

Nevertheless

making

money

feels good and

elevate

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people

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motivations, it might make you exhausted after a

while

. So

for making

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an even wiser

decision

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it’s better to choose high

income

job

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refer

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to your interest.

Moreover

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unlike only a few

number of

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people

who choose to select a

job

without thinking about financial problems in the future and its consequences, most

of

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the

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people

choose to select their

job

professionally and spend

time

to enjoy

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their interest as a hobby at the same

time

.

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,

choosing

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a

job

as a surgeon and

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following

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painting skills in their leisure

time

.

However

the following statement

don’t

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mean painters can’t make

money

as surgeons,

this

is just a personal theory.

On the other hand

, having a high

income

can’t be the only factor

for

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choosing a career. There are more important factors to consider. There are always easier choices for having markable incomes,

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they might be illegal or against

humanity

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rights.

Actually

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we should put

this

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moral factors first and think if the selected

job

is useful for society or if it brings any benefit

for

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humanity,

also

defining the advantages and disadvantages of the selected

job

.

To conclude

, in my view, having a noticeable

income

should

be consider

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in total because somehow our entire life depends on it,

due to

the moral side of it and our interests, it’s better to consider all before making

decision

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a decision

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.