The most important consideration when choosing any career or job is having a high income. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly

money

is the deciding factor in the selection of a

career

. Many

people

believe high earnings

allows

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them to provide financial security for themselves and their families. Whether or not

money

is a significant factor in choosing a

job

, considering each person's interest. In

this

,

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I will give my opinion and describe why

am

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I

agree

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whit

this

statement.

To begin

whit the importance of

money

in society is unavoidable. So most

of

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people

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go after careers with high incomes. ,Witch it’s a wise decision to make. A

career

with high salaries, probably won’t need

a

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amount

hour

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of work and

also

you may provide yourself less difficult life. ,

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each

career

has its own difficulty and even in choosing the following activity

people

should consider their interests as well.

Nevertheless

making

money

feels good and elevates

people

's motivations, but it might make you exhausted after a while. So for making an even wiser decision it’s better to choose

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job

refers

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to your interest. ,

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unlike only a few numbers of

people

who choose to select a position without thinking about financial problems in the future and its consequences, most

of

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people

choose to select their

job

professionally and spend time enjoying their interest as a hobby at the same time.

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, choosing

a

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work as a surgeon and

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painting skills in their leisure time.

However

the following statement doesn’t mean painters can’t make

money

as surgeons,

this

is just a personal theory.

On the other hand

, having a high profit can’t be the only factor in choosing a

career

. There are more important factors to consider. There are always easier choices for having markable incomes, which

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might be illegal or against human rights. ,

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we should put these moral factors

first

and think if the selected

job

is useful for society or if it brings any benefit to humanity,

also

defining the advantages and disadvantages of the selected

job

. To conclude, in my view, having a noticeable income should be considered in total because somehow our entire life depends on it, due to the moral side of it and our interests, it’s better to consider all before making a decision.