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As most people spend most of their adult lives at work, job satisfaction is essential to individual well-being. What factors contribute to job satisfaction? How realistic is the expectation of job satisfaction for all workers?

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In today’s life, many people
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 in flexible environments while others are exposed to stressful conditions. It is inadvisable to proceed with any
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 if the employer does not consider the vital paths required in convincing their employees to continue their jobs properly. In
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 essay, I am going to address the contributing factors to
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 satisfaction which are in terms of working hours, salaries and graduates. It has been essential to
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 individuals’ commitments to exclude
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 particular fellow from 9 to 5 working hours.
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, some people cannot be punctual at
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 because they have disabled daughters or sons who cannot travel to school independently.
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, it is essential to change the original schedule to give these people flexibility. So
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 type of help would give them more
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 contentment. The fact that cannot be denied and encourage the employee remarkably is the reliable salaries and promotions to the highest achievable workers.
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, if a
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 in a factory can fix a broken down one of the machines, it is illogical not to award
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 for his great help to the factory.
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, if we grant
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, he will be grateful and more confident in his
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. Awarding and reasonable salaries are essential elements of
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 satisfaction. It is essential to accommodate the right person at
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 in the right place according to their degree or certificate. If an individual has graduated as an accountant, it is unrealistic to
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 a
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 as a carpenter. One of the consequences is that the
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 will not like his
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 because there is no sensible relationship between
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 and his main occupation. To conclude, if every
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 can take part in a
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 that suits him financially, vocationally and academically, it could contribute to climbing the career ladder successfully.

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