Some people believe that giving aid to poorer countries has more negative effects than positive effects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The argument over whether giving

aids

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to less developed

countries

has positive or negative impacts has not been settled yet. It seems to me that

this

really depends on

different

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the different

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kinds of

aids

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given by developed

countries

.

To begin

with, some

aids

like offering monetary assistance have harmful effects on poorer

countries

. It is true that

this

kind of aid can increase a country’s income directly in a rather short period of time, but it does not

last

long because once the financial aid is run out of, the country will become poor again. In the long run, some poorer

countries

tend to rely on

such

aid and take it for granted

instead

of working hard to improve their living conditions. Once they don’t receive financial help

for

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rich

countries

, they would be faced with even worse situations due to laziness and even corruption among authorities.

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the other hand, there are other forms of

aids

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which can make a great difference

to

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poor

countries

’ development. Compared with giving money directly,

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including providing medical assistance,

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and educational

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help as well as assisting poorer

countries

to build roads and railways aim to improve local people’s living conditions in a long run.

In other words

, these types of

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contribute to

long-term

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the long-term

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well-being of poorer

countries

.

Furthermore

, many developed

countries

invest

factories

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in factories

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in those poorer ones and introduce advanced technology in local communities, which helps to improve locals’ lives on their own. Only in

this

way can poorer

countries

get rid of poverty fundamentally. In conclusion, when rich

countries

offer

aids

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to poorer nations, they should consider what kinds of assistance benefit the latter to the largest extent and

thus

to

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help them out of poverty.