Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?
these days visiting
the
hard area to see like the Sahara desert and Antarctica is getting more popular with the community. Correct article usage
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This
topic has its own pros and cons. But in my ,opinion its disadvantages overpower its advantages.
On the one hand, visiting where conditions are hard can have pros. human beings will see regions that was
unknown to them before. Change the verb form
were
As a result
, they will come through with situations and places
that they were not used to, Also
they can learn new survival methods that may help them in their life ahead. For instance
, visiting a place like the north pole with climate conditions and snowy weather may teach people
to survive in these places
with just small techniques.
Furthermore
, seeing these places
is suitable from another perspective for people
. I mean the cultural point. They can get to know new cultures and make a link to them. This
gained new view may seem to be unnecessary but new cultures always bring new experiences. For example
, Buddhism is a religion or maybe in better words a culture specific
for Add a hyphen
culture-specific
further
east and it has very big lessons to learn for people
who get to know this
precious knowledge.
On the other hand
, visiting these places
may have its own cons. All people
are not used to these conditions and various viruses can make them sick. The microbes are specific to their region so when people
inhale the air it can make them unwell. Also
, these regions are hard to get so the crowd may get injured. Rough places
like tall mountains or harsh cold in areas like the north pole are the reasons that may cause harm to people
. Also
, these regions may get harmed ,Usually
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,Usually
people
just care about themselves and their nearby therefore
they do not pay attention to nature so they may throw their trash in these places
or do other things such
as break tree branches or destroy bird nests.
In conclusion, visiting these areas may help people
to improve their life skills however
, it has a big variety of cons that do not allow me to think about its advantages. We can name lots of them such
as damaging nature or things related to people
themselves.Submitted by rsttorkan on
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
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- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
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- One possible drawback...
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