Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

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hard area to see like the Sahara desert and Antarctica is getting more popular with the community.
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topic has its own pros and cons. But in my ,opinion its disadvantages overpower its advantages. On the one hand, visiting where conditions are hard can have pros. human beings will see regions that
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unknown to them before.
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, they will come through with situations and
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that they were not used to,
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they can learn new survival methods that may help them in their life ahead.
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, visiting a place like the north pole with climate conditions and snowy weather may teach
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to survive in these
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with just small techniques.
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, seeing these
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is suitable from another perspective for
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. I mean the cultural point. They can get to know new cultures and make a link to them.
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gained new view may seem to be unnecessary but new cultures always bring new experiences.
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east and it has very big lessons to learn for
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who get to know
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precious knowledge.
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, visiting these
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may have its own cons. All
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are not used to these conditions and various viruses can make them sick. The microbes are specific to their region so when
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inhale the air it can make them unwell.
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, these regions are hard to get so the crowd may get injured. Rough
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like tall mountains or harsh cold in areas like the north pole are the reasons that may cause harm to
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.
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, these regions may get harmed ,
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people
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just care about themselves and their nearby
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they do not pay attention to nature so they may throw their trash in these
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or do other things
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as break tree branches or destroy bird nests. In conclusion, visiting these areas may help
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to improve their life skills
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, it has a big variety of cons that do not allow me to think about its advantages. We can name lots of them
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as damaging nature or things related to
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themselves.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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