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below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of Britain.

#information #police #budget #area #britain
The table displays information about three
souces
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 of
police
budget
 between 2017 and 2018 in one area of
Britian
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Britain
, while the pie charts illustrate the proportion of
police
budget
 spent in the same period. Looking from an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there
were
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 no significant
change
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changes
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 in
proportions
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the proportions
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 of
police
 income and expense between 2017 and 2018.
Additionally
, a majority of
police
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the police
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budget
 was from
national
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the national
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 government, followed by local taxes and other sources,
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of which
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which
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 all those figures rose in 2018. In
term
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terms
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 of
expense
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expenses
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, the most of money was used for paying
officers
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officers'
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 salaries. As shown in the table, from 2017 to 2018, a slight rise in
police
budget
 from
national
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the national
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governemnt
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government
 was recorded from 175.5
million
pound
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pounds
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 to 177.8
million
pound
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pounds
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, while the figure for local taxes experienced
a
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 increase from 91.2
million
pound
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pounds
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 to 102.3
million
pound
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pounds
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.
However
, there was almost no change in the number of other sources
such
 as grants at around 38
millions
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million
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. Regarding spending money, by 2018,
although
 there was a drop in the figure for paying salaries from 75% to 69%, it still remained
as
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the largest proportion. The percentage of
technology
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the technology
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budget
 rose from 8% to 14% while the figure for buildings and transport remained
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unchanged
 at 17%. 25 min
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