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A 36-year-old male reported to the Department of Periodontics with a chief complaint of a small single painful boil on the gum of
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upper posterior tooth from the
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10
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. He had a history of Covid-19 infection for which he was hospitalized 1 month back with
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fever with cough, generalised weakness and mild difficulty in breathing. Symptomatic supportive treatment was done with antiviral, IV antibiotic, IV steroid and
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. Remdesivir during his hospital
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. He was discharged after 15
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with a negative Covid-19 RT-PCR report and negative KOH (potassium hydroxide) nasal swab report. During discharge, nasal endoscopy and MRI PNS with contrast were normal. The
patient
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had a history of intake of multivitamins, antacids, antibiotics and methylprednisolone 8mg twice daily for three
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after discharge along with seven
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of home quarantine. On clinical examination, an abscess was present in the attached gingiva of tooth # 24 which was tender on percussion. The tooth was examined to rule out fracture and trauma from occlusion. Intraoral periapical radiograph revealed no significant findings. The abscess was curetted and irrigated with
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solution [Figure 1A]. After 5
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, the
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developed severe pain in the
palatal
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region and mobility in the anterior left front
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. On clinical examination, grade 2 mobility along with tenderness on percussion was present in
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# 21, 22, 23, and 24. Painful
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swelling was
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prominent in the left pre-
maxillary
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region. As
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of the
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had aggravated, emergent CBCT was advised avoiding
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view. In CBCT, complete opacification of the left
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sinus with air entrapment was evident. Multiple ill-defined osteolytic lesions with irregular borders extending from the distal aspect of
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canal with involvement of both the buccal and
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cortices of the left
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region were seen. Destruction of the buccal and
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alveolus was present from
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# 21 to 26 giving it a moth-eaten appearance.
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wall of the left nasal fossa was involved. The floor of the
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sinus was breached on the left side in
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# 24, 25, and 26 regions, but intact on the right side. Perforation of the sinus floor in the 26 and 27 regions was
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seen [Figure 1B]. Immediately without any delay, the
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was referred to the
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emergency ward with
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diagnosis of mucormycosis
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multiplanar MR imaging of paranasal sinuses and
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report confirmed the diagnosis of mucormycosis involving the left
maxillary
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alveolus, perialveolar tissues and left middle turbinate.
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