You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. The most important function of music is that it helps people reduce stress. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Music

is

a

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ancient

activities

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activity

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since human civilization,

the

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importance of

music

was always adequate. Many people

claims

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claim

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that it is

benifical

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beneficial

to

listen

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music

because it

is reduce

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reduces

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the

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apply

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stress . In my, opinion the position of

music

appear

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appears

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to be more rational. In

this

, we will

further

elaborate my views for favouring the

postive

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positive

impact of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. To commence with, the

first

and foremost reason behind

this

argument is that in

this

modern era,

music

plays a vital role in society because pupils are

fascinating

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about

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music

and

music

is quite eminent among

youngster

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and

toddler's

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. Another striking benefit in

this

regard is that

music

has

ability

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the ability

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to change the mood very quickly and make adequate in a

second

. Categorically discussing it cannot be ignored that the main reason

is

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behind

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that it

is

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also

reduce

anixety

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anxiety

because it has healing power. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from the fact

is

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that the recent survey conducted by

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of Oxford

is

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reveales

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revealed

reveals

that

music

also

help

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helps

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in

the

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apply

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depression and other conical diseases

such

as medicine, two

group

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take a participate in

this

survey and

mind blowing

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fact is depicts in

this

survey. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that I

am

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also strongly believe

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also

strongly believe that it is very efficient in reducing the volume of stress because

music

mainly

effect

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effects

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on

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apply

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the brain system. Apart from the reasons

mention

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mentioned

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above it can be clearly stated why many are in favour of

this

trend In conclusion,

music

is

a

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art which has

potential

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influence in recent years. According to The argument aforementioned above , one can reach

to

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apply

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a

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the

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conclusion that the

benifits

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benefits

of

music

are indeed too great.