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Newspapers have an enormous influence on people’s opinions and ideas. Do you think it is a positive or negative situation?

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With the advancement in modern technology, the
press
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 impact on individuals'
view
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views
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 and
idea
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.
This
 has led to a consistent rise in the percentage of effect on the crowd decision. If asked, I would say that it is beneficial to society. Discussing the positive influence of the presence of the
press
, the foremost is that they are considered
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the most reliable source of information.
Therefore
, even in
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era
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 many individuals read it daily.
For instance
, in countries like India, where there are many languages, they often trust articles from the
press
.
Furthermore
, journals publish all
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 of information or advertisement using it crowds are changing their decision. They read it in order to learn the current affairs
thus
 in developing countries it is a common practice that if an individual wants to buy a new property they will check for an
advertisment
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advertisement
first
.
In addition
, due to advancements in ,technology these publishing companies have developed their phone application in order to allow users to read
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 from
his
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or
her
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 phone.
For instance
, Time of India allows its customer to read its daily newspaper from its phone application.
Moreover
, there
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 many fake
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 are trending on social media, and it
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 for a common person to validate that information,
thus
 reading new papers one can verify it.
Thus
, considering all the things, the
press
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 effect on an individual life. The most vital
this
 is trust among the population.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • influence
  • opinions
  • perspectives
  • crucial
  • informing
  • educating
  • biased
  • sensationalized
  • shape
  • attitudes
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