Many office imp authoritiesose restriction on smoking within the offices premises. Some governments have even banned smoking in all public places. This is a good idea but it takes away some of our freedom. What are your opinions on this?

several office imp authoritiesose do not have a problem on

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smoking

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offices

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premises. While some

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responsible

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smoking

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in

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all

public places and

this

is a good idea but somehow it

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in

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others

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behaviours.

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essay agrees that the administrations should put

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limit on

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something

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building

and make special places for that action. To commence with that each place does not own for people who are smoking

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cigarettes

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separately

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smoking

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place

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must be banned and

also

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penalized on them.

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a fine

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people who do that

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public transportation.

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on

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smoking in the offices is

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annoyed

others

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none

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smokers. some individuals prefer to stay in

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climate while they doing their work and

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a prime right for them.

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, Smokers

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none-smokers

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the effect of smoking and so

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should

mannagers

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their decisions.

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, stores have prevented smoking within the whole

stores

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ro

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to

keep their

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clients

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health

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until

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of

the place. In conclusion,

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Manager

should take an action

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stop smoking within the

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building

and

to

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create another way to offer that matter for smokers and I

agrees

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with that statement.