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Nowadays distance learning programs have gained popularity but some people argues that online courses can never be as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#distance #programs #popularity #people #courses #college #university #person
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distance
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 learning courses became more popular.
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contrast, some
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 never be as productive as offline in person. I totally agree that offline
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 is better than
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 learning. On the one hand, since online learning demand day by day rapidly increase, internet connectivity became more convenient compare to
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type
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a professional
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structure
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 have multiple drawbacks.
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related
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 dependent on software.
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 any issue related to attendance that it
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big
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a big
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 problem for
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the student
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 problem,
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although
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 every student has
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 related to their different topics. Classroom
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 students can easily ask their questions to faculty members directly.
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became critical.
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 can not able to give all question answer
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is directly affect
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 child productivity.
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, India is
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 year corona pandemic effect all over the world at that time period online learning became trending.
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, many offices adopt work from
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constast
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parent
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parents
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 can not afford new electronic devices for their
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, economical hassles affect them. At that moment, some adults
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lose
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 their important years
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study
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. To put
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it into
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 a nutshell, despite
distance
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 learning
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 some advantages
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, never
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same
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 manner in quality of education as
classroom
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a classroom
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