In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The technology
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is developing rapidly these days, and some
people
claim that in the
future
, printed newspapers and
books
will not be on sale anymore because
people
will prefer reading online without paying extra money. I disagree with
this
statement because printed
books
still have more advantages.
First
of all,
paper
printed
books
are
healfier
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healthier
to our body. According to studies, staring at the computer screen for more than 5 hours every day will lead you to both a dry eye
sundrome
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syndrome
and a very bad
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.
Furthermore
, reading online while you are on
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transportation will give you moving sickness, which is going to distract you from reading.
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Electromagnetic
radiation can
also
be harmful to your brain,
therefore
printed
books
are
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healthier
to
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our body. The
second
reason why
people
will keep on buying printed
books
is
because
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there are
people
who prefer
paper
books
.
This
is
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maturity
because they like the texture and scent of
paper
books
. some
people
including
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myself
prefer
paper
books
because of the
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sound when turning to the
next
pages. These features of
paper
books
comfort
people
,
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and
helps
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relieve their stress.
Lastly
, we can assume that
future
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the future
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is not going to be far different from today. Even though applications
such
as kindle
Books
are already available online, the
paper
book industry is not slowing down. From
this
fact, We can infer that
people
will
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still buy printed newspapers or
books
in the
future
paper
books
have special features that can never be replaced by
the
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technology.
paper
books
are less harmful to our body and they are comforting to both
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Our
UV
. ears and noses.
Moreover
, we can assume that
people
still prefer printed
paper
over online reading based on the statistics of
paper
book Industries.
Therefore
, I strongly believe that
people
will still buy printed newspapers and
books
in the
future
, even though they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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