Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and the disadvantages for tourist who visit such places?

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as Sahara and Antarctica where the climate is opposite to the natural environment. The importance of tourism was always debatable and has now become more controversial. Many people claim that it is beneficial while others reject

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as dessert are not explored too much that's why all

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of travellers are fascinated about the location. Another pivotal

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that Antarctica has a minute population and most of the area is concealed and pupils are

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gain some information about it. Needless to say

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good stead.

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but the vital point is that the upward

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of tourism

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the immense growth of pollution and its

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global warming which is

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pristine environment of

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regions affects them terribly. ,

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wild animals

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these areas are suffering from hunting and cruelty.

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, it is apparent why many are against

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notion. According to the argument aforementioned above, can reach a conclusion that the benefits of the exploration are instrumental indeed.

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, its potential drawbacks should not be overlooked either.