Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In the current globalization era,
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culture seems to be easier to be exposed to the different
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of the World. It is argued by scholars that another
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in addition
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to
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taught to primary
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are better than secondary
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. In my opinion,
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open for
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discussion. The
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reason that some people believe
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a foreign
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at an earlier age is better
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to
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’s learning capability. Some
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noted that at an early age, human brains are more adaptive to learning new things. In
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, when
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primary
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are taught a foreign
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, it is easier to remember and absorb naturally.
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to that, primary
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will gain familiarity
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using a different
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in their daily lives. Learning
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language
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is a challenge especially when they should have
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the confidence
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to execute the
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.
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comfort when
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use those languages to communicate
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others. In the
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that they are using it wrong, they tend to be more flexible to adjust as well.
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, there are some drawbacks as some people say that it is not a good idea to force
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children
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children
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to learn a foreign
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. As
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children
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, there is not much room for them to make a good call or have
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what they would like to do.
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, the responsibility will be on
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parents
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who usually decide on it. Sometimes,
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may prefer to go outside and play, rather than
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sit in
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intensive classes.
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, for some
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,
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are unintentionally forcing them to study. Apart from the unwillingness of
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, when learning at an early age
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often
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more on tuition
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. Nowadays in Thailand, education
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more and more expensive.
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should be able to
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their
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school
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that they can afford. When the
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offers a foreign
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as one of their core subjects, it may cost more in tuition
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.
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and based on my
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experience
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a school
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in Thailand that offers a foreign
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as a core subject
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more expensive tuition fee ranging
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more than 60,000 Thai Baht, but
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, a
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that does not have
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subject is
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language
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usually cost less than 60,000 Thai Baht per student. In conclusion,
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adolescent to learn a foreign
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is better when
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at primary
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or secondary
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is a question that can be answered on a
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case
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basis.
Parents
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and
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should carefully set the importance
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the best outcome.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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