Some say sports facilities are important they promote healthy lifestyle. Do you agree or disagree?

Sports

play

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role in our society. In

this

modern era, sport is eminent among

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and middlers. Most of the young generation are following celebrities

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this

field. In my, opinion the position of

sports

facilities appears to be more rational. In

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positive impact of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant fact is that

sports

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great activity which

need

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adequate physics to perform. For, instance the weight of

body

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will be not overweight and much thin. Another striking benefit in

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regard is that

sports

fascinated children to improve

physical

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health. Categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind

this

is that pupils participated in the event and encourage society to

watching

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sports

. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying

reason

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stems from the fact

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that health is the new wealth in

this

contemporary world because fitness is precious and prestigious without hard work we did not get it. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that gym and football is a

facility

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which

bestow

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potential overwhelming in bodies.

Moreover

, the survey conducted by the prestigious new paper the Hindustan Times revealed

that

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who performed

sports

activities which have great immune

system

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rather than who did not

performed

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. Apart from the reasons

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above Clearly stated why many are

favour

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of

this

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dilemma

. In conclusion, according to the argument above, one can reach

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a

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conclusion that the

benifits

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benefits

of

sport

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facilities are indeed too great.