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Some people argue that thanks to the widespread accessibility of the internet, libraries are no longer necessary. Do you agree or disagree?

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With an increase in the usage of the internet worldwide, mankind has moved towards a digital approach for most of their daily chores like banking, education, shopping, and many more. Tasks like reading and writing have
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drastically changed since the onset of technology. Some people believe that
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online educational platforms can replace
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traditional libraries as there are various options and they are easily accessible. I, too, agree with the above-mentioned statement and
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, the database available
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cyberspace is extensive. There is a plethora of options to choose from, based on the levels and requirements.
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, an online information centre might have more
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 of books than a hundred
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physical libraries combined.
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, virtual libraries help save time and
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. Not only the books can be accessed in just
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 clicks but they can
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 be downloaded and read on any device, anywhere in the world. For
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 reason, more and more humans prefer cloud services rather than going to a building and getting a book.
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, these
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 provide flexibility to the readers in terms of comfort. To conclude, it is true that the benefits of digital educational hubs outweigh their physical (offline) counterparts.
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, there are rural areas where the connectivity is poor and the citizens don't have proper technologies.
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, the government should gradually transition to
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web systems wherever needed and keep up with the incoming trends as the virtual realm is the future of
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humankind.
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