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Computer today can quickly and accurately languages . therefore, it is a save the time . To what extent do you agree or not ?

#computer #languages #save #time
The
computer
 has made humans'
life
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 easy. Nowadays
computers
 can quickly and accurately
languages
 . It
also
 translates from one prose to another
language
. The use of
computers
 in
languages
 is really time-saving.
However
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 few people have a contrarian view . let's discuss both views and
then
 I will share my opinion on
this
.
Firstly
, the
computer
 can process
languages
 correctly
.but
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but
 it has limitations like processing speed and grammatical range.
Computers
 can process only those
languages
 which are developed by programmers.
For
instance
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languages
 like Hebrew, and Sanskrit can not be processed unless
language
 processing software is installed on the
computer
.
Computer
users
 have to face numerous issues
while
 processing
languages
.
Secondly
 ,
computers
 provide advantages for various
language
 services like
translation
, grammar correction, punctuation and
language
 training.Most
users
 find it easy to work on
translation
 services, grammar correction etc.
Computers
 made it really easy to work on
language
 requirements. It has made
users
 of
languages
 competent and suave . For ,instance google
translation
 services by
alphabet
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Inc
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 have made life easy for translators to check and verify the quality of
translation
 . any
language
 can be translated into any
language
 with the help of
google
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 Translate. In conclusion, many
languages
 can be processed with
help
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 of
computers
 . I am of
opinion
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the opinion
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 that
languages
 can be worked and processed with the help of
computers
.
Computers
 should be utilised more and more in various prose processing.As we use
computers
 more in prose processing it will benefit
users
 of those
languages
. ,
Also
 we can save
languages
 from becoming extinct .
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Ensure that you fully address all parts of the question and provide a clear opinion with supporting ideas. Use specific examples to illustrate your points.
coherence and cohesion
Your essay demonstrates a well-structured introduction and conclusion. Focus on maintaining clear and logical connections between sentences and paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion further.

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