In some countries, governments are encouraging industries and businesses to move to regional areas outside the big cities. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

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Decenterlization
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Decentralization
is a huge trend
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affecting the
business
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world nowadays. Most governments are taking a step forward and
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encouraging
business
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owners to move to rural
areas
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.
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step has positive and negative aspects that will be discussed in
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essay. Shifting
business
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outside central
areas
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has many
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positive
effects
business
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-wide.
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of all, land prices are less expensive in regional
areas
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compared to the ones in the cities.
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is due to the high population demand to live in central
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for reasons
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as studying and more job opportunities. Another advantage is that workers' salaries are lower
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the ones in cities. Workers in central
areas
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would require higher salaries to afford
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in the modern lifestyle. Paying for apartment
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and electricity bills.
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, living in rural
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would not
aquire
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require
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higher income since most people are living with their families.
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,
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decision does not come without downsides. As
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do not require
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salary range, they would lack
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to be good
employees
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.
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, much effort is needed to improve
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employees
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skillls
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skills
by training and gaining sharing knowledge to become
proffesionals
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professionals
.
Internet
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connection is known for its unreliability in rural
areas
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.
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,
internet
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speed is faster in cities compared to
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.
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, suffering from weak signals and slow
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would
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inevitable, since most
business
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procedures demand wifi connection. In conclusion, relocating
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business
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a business
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is a big step that should be considered
caferully
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carefully
by authorities and
business
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owners. As much as
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process could benefit
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business
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businesses
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to save up money
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both lang and workers, it would require much attention to training new
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and suffering from weak
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conection
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connection
connections
.
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