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Modern Lifestyle mean that many parents have little time for their children. Many children suffer because they do not get as much as attention from their parents as children did in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

#lifestyle #parents #time #children #attention
Many
children
 undergo trauma by not getting enough focus from their
parents
. Back in
time
,
parents
 spent sufficient
time
 with their
children
 to ensure they were satisfied and did not undergo any issues. But in
this
 era and with the new lifestyle, it is not the case. Certainly, I do agree that
parents
 should spend quality
time
 with their
children
. As
this
 helps them to grow stress-free and focus on their education, and as well as a parent we collect some good memories when they grow. Traditionally
children
 are eager to acquire their
parents
' attention while they play or create any new inventions with their toys or when studying and they are excited to express these activities by showing them.
This
 subconsciously helps improve their creativity and helps them to grow their mental fitness. Since most of the
children
 reside inside their homes, their only source of communication is with their
parents
. But if they do not get any opportunity to talk, play and engage, that definitely will impact them negatively. Meanwhile, as a
parent
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 we will never be going to receive the same opportunity to be with them as the
children
 grow faster. Engaging with them , spending a joyful
time
 , listening to their brilliant ideas and looking after them could help them to feel better and to have a healthy relationship with us.
This
 will enable us to gather good memories to share when they are adults.
Although
 as a parent we are extremely busy or occupied with
any
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important
meeting
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, still our
children
 are an utter priority
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 anything as they came from us. So giving
time
 to them and being with them whenever they need would come
first
 as
this
 is my personal opinion.
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