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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult such as the Sahara desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages of visiting this area?

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Nowadays, there is
the
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 increasing number of people who are willing to travel to places where conditions are extreme. In
this
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travelers
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travellers
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 who are willing to do so.
To begin
 with, there are several benefits to visiting
such
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area
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. One could witness the untouched beauty and serene landscapes all by themselves.
This
 is because touristy locations are ideal
bustling
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 and full of people wandering around.
Secondly
, they could have a sense of
person
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a person
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 who is climbing the infamous mountain
Everest
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not only for the experience but
also
 for their personal achievement.
On the other hand
, there are several disadvantages regarding travelling to
such
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area
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, I would like to emphasize that it is difficult to find an ambulance or a hospital in places far from the city.
For instance
, if a person is injured or has a fear of heights, they need a doctor, but the doctor is only in urban areas, so I think
this
 is the main cons.
Furthermore
, The Sahara desert is extremely hot. In its heat, many unpleasant situations occur,
such
 as burns, rashes, or sunstroke. Antarctica is the complete opposite of the desert, it’s very cold, of course, which
also
 leads to unconsciousness. In conclusion. Travelling to locations where conditions are extreme could have disadvantages
such
 as limited medical services, high
cost
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 of travelling around, delays and insurance coverage even
through
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 they might find untouched beauty and have a
since
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sense
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 of achievement. In my point of view, the cons outweigh the pros clearly and the nation who are willing to travel there should
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really
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 research and plan well before making the trips.
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