In many societies the life expectancy has increased. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of life expectancy.

In many societies, due to technological advances and increasing the availability of medical care

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can live longer term than in the past. On one

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it has positive

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negative aspects are inevitable. The following essay will look into both aspects and outline my opinion. Commonly, high life expectancy is considered

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a desirable trend by many

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. One of the most positive viewpoints is that

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are less depressed, and they have more hope. Generally,

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society would be happier.

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,

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will be more efficient in their lifetime

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as work time and et cetera.

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of experienced

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can flourish

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, we can use their knowledge to improve jobs and businesses. So, the benefits of long life are considerable. On the downside, living for a long time can cause

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, overpopulation in each country that has not prepared plans would be considered a problem

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different parts of

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can put a lot of pressure on the healthcare system, economy and so on.

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, society would face a decrease in job

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. As mentioned before having more accomplished can have positive results but it would decrease job

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for young

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. to sum up, increasing life expectancy can have both

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and

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. authorities should be considered the pros and cons together and prepare a plan to resolve the problem.